Purpose and Overview:
The purpose of the revision assignment is to help students develop business-style writing skills and improve their case study reports. The revision must be an improvement to the first submission and meet the required components to earn credit. See more detailed instructions below.
Revisions Assignment:
For your revisions, please complete all four steps:
1. Review the TA comments you received on your first submission of your report. If you did not complete the first submission you are not eligible to submit revisions.
2. You must rework the 1st submission of your report. Push yourself to make the document better and enhance your overall writing. Your revisions should differ substantially from your original submission. You must go beyond correcting grammatical and other identified business-style writing errors. Revisions may require deleting and rewriting entire sections. The goal of the revision is to produce a significantly improved work of clarity, cohesiveness, structure, and grammatical correctness.
Your TA is not a line editor. You need to make additional changes outside of your TA feedback. Carefully re-read and re-work each sentence to ensure you have substantially improved your report. Even if you received a high grade on your first submission, you must enhance your writing to receive points.
3. Your REVISIONS must include a response to your TA’s feedback using the prompts below:
Include your answers on a new page, before your report (after your title page and before your report). The responses will not be counted in your page count.
Did you make all the changes that were clearly highlighted or identified by your TA?
How did you use those same suggestions to change similar things (that weren’t specifically highlighted) throughout the rest of your report?
How well did you execute the overall recommendations made by your TA? Explain.
What types of changes did you make to improve your report beyond what your TA suggested?
What do you think is the biggest improvement you’ve made to your report and why?
4. Highlight all changes you’ve made in yellow.
Any student retaking this course may not submit assignments from their previous semester.
Artificial Intelligence and Academic Integrity: This course assumes that all work submitted by a student will be generated independently by the student. Any substantive portion of an assignment done by someone else, including AI-generated content, is not allowed and will be treated as academic misconduct. Students may use AI to help generate ideas but may NOT use AI to write their assignments. The writing portion must be done independently by each student.
Report Format:
Use APA format to write format the report and to cite your sources.
Include a title page and references page (not included in the page count)
Reports should be formatted for an easy scan (bold headings, proper margins, and adequate spacing)
Written using full sentences and in paragraph form.
Use 12-point, Times New Roman font, double-spacing, and 1-inch margins.
Word.doc or docx file only
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